A Poem for Lily

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Rachael Polachek

Discussion Starter · Aug 4, 2005

I'm not much of a poet, as you can plainly see, but this comes from my heart. :love5:

When she insists on sharing a pillow with me...
That's Lily giving love

When she shadows me from room to room...
That's Lily giving love

When she clings to me to hold her tight...
That's Lily giving love

When she presses her soft cheek against my neck...
That's Lily giving love

When she wakes me up at 3am just to say hello...
That's Lily giving love

When she twirls and dances just because I'm home...
That's Lily giving love

When she licks my face, my ears, my arms...
That's Lily giving love

Love can be expressed in so many ways. Sometimes it's a hug, a caress or a spoken word. And sometimes it’s a wet nose and wagging tail.

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Auggies Mom

· #2 · Aug 4, 2005

I think it is beautiful and expresses exactly how loving our babies are

JOLIE'SMOM

· #3 · Aug 4, 2005

I think you are an excellent poet. I could actual visualize Lily doing these things!

Tinker

· #4 · Aug 4, 2005

I have no idea if it's good poetry or not but it certainly expresses the love they give in such abundance and the joy in that love. I adored this Rachael.

Cooper

· #5 · Aug 4, 2005

Lily is the luckiest dog in the whole wide world to have you for a mom. I think both of you totally rock. :headbang:

nikki&paris

· #6 · Aug 4, 2005

That's beautiful.

mychisangel

· #7 · Aug 4, 2005

That is truly beautiful Rachael and it really says it all!

You are both so very much meant for each other. :love3:

xfayex

· #8 · Aug 4, 2005

JOLIE'SMOM said:
I think you are an excellent poet. I could actual visualize Lily doing these things!

me too even if she is the silent type! awww thats was lovely!

nabi

· #9 · Aug 4, 2005

Great read...beautiful Lily deserves to have a mom who can express her love through verse .

KB

· #10 · Aug 4, 2005

That was beautiful Rach!!!!

Mia's Mom

· #11 · Aug 4, 2005

Awwww, that is so sweet!!

Jayne

· #12 · Aug 4, 2005

ur very talented, thats such a sweet poem :love5:

chimom

· #13 · Aug 4, 2005

Well, I don't know good poetry from bad, but I do know that is really sweet, and expresses the love you and Lily share, and that's all that matters.

Rachael Polachek

Discussion Starter · #14 · Aug 4, 2005

Cooper said:
Lily is the luckiest dog in the whole wide world to have you for a mom. I think both of you totally rock. :headbang:

That's one of the nicest compliments I've ever received.

Thanks, guys! Lily and I are a match made in heaven. :wave:

Cooper

· #15 · Aug 4, 2005

Rachael Polachek said:
Cooper said:

Lily is the luckiest dog in the whole wide world to have you for a mom. I think both of you totally rock. :headbang:

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That's one of the nicest compliments I've ever received.

Thanks, guys! Lily and I are a match made in heaven. :wave:

I do have my moments. :lol:

Chico's Mama

· #16 · Aug 4, 2005

that is such a beautiful poem...i love it!

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